These words will increase your vocabulary try to speak these words instead of common words.
Use Excellent, Superb instead of good
Use terrible and atrocious instead of bad
Use joyful and ecstatic instead of happy
Use melancholy and sorrowful instead of sad
Use enormous and colossal instead of big
Use tiny minuscule instead of small
Use rapid and swift instead of fast
Use sluggish and lethargic instead of slow
Use scratching and sweltering instead of hot
Use icey and fridged instead of cold
Use stunning and exquisite instead of beautiful
Use unappealing and unsightly instead of ugly
use untroublesome effortless instead of easy
Use arduous and challenging instead of difficult
Use antiquated ancient instead of old
Use innovative and novel instead of new
Use immaculate and pristine instead of clean
Use grimy and filthy instead of dirty
Use radiant and gleaming instead of bright
Use somber and gloomy instead of dark
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